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第57章 2005-2009年等级考试真题作文及模拟作文(9)

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点提出一个问题,提纲第二点指出解决该问题的紧迫性,提纲第三点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状;指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型,说明解决办法;从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。

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Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.

However, we shouldn"t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It"s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others" computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes.

2. 模拟作文二:Self help Traveling of College Students

(1)大学生出去旅行经常会选择“自助游”。

(2)分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因。

(3)你的看法。

审题概述:

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点指出一种现象,提纲第二点要求分析这种现象产生的原因,提纲第三点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:简单说明何谓“自助游”,描述大学生热衷于“自助游”的现象;分析大学生选择“自助游”主要原因;阐述“我”对“自助游”的看法。

【参考范文】

Selfhelp Traveling of College Students

So called selfhelp traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer selfhelp traveling to following a tour group.

Why are college students so fond of selfhelp traveling? Above all, selfhelp traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don"t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, selfhelp traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in selfhelp traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal.

As a college student, I enjoy selfhelp traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, selfhelp travel helps me learn how to deal with people better.

3. 模拟作文三: Credit Cards on Campus

(1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡。

(2)分析产生该现象的原因。

(3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议。

审题概述:

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点指出一种现象,提纲第二点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第三点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述大学生使用信用卡的现状,分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因,针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。

【参考范文】

Credit Cards on Campus

In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks" more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them.

The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards.

As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don"t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.

4. 模拟作文四: College Students" Starting Their Own Undertakings

(1)现在有不少大学生毕业后开始自主创业,政府鼓励这种行为,而且还给大学生创业提供了许多优惠和便利措施。

(2)产生这一现象的原因。

(3)你的看法。

审题概述:

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点指出一种现象,提纲第二点要求分析现象产生的原因,提纲第三点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述目前许多大学生自主创业的现象,分析大学生选择自主创业的原因,阐述“我”对大学生自主创业的看法。

【参考范文】

College Students" Starting Their Own Undertakings

Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation. The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students. This phenomenon has aroused great concern from the whole society.

However, why do so many college students take the way of starting their own undertakings? Firstly, college students are facing severe employment situations. Many college graduates couldn"t find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses. Moreover, some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own businesses. Besides, the government"s encouragement and the media"s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students" enthusiasm to take this way.

As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings. However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, ability to endure hardship and a feasible project. Therefore, think it over and make full preparation before you decide to start your own business.